In the next essay, I will write about the future which Steve Jobs has imagined. He was trying to create a new world by his creative Apple productions. I would like to write the vision of his future, and consider if we can create that future without him.
Thesis statement : The image of the future painted by Steve Jobs, will still be created even though his death.
You have a claim, and it's an interesting viewpoint. However, we also need three supporting points to add to the claim to create a fully formed argumentative thesis statement. What are the reasons you think Steve Jobs vision of the future will realized? And more to the point, how do you articulate Steven Jobs vision of the future? In a sentence, what is Steven Jobs vision of the future?
返信削除I think your topic for the essay is very interesting and timely but it might be hard to write an academic essay because no one but Steve Jobs himself probably knows what exactly Steven's vision of the future is....
返信削除I know Chaki!w
返信削除so I'm gonna change my theme:(
May Steve be with us all.
返信削除Ok, enough with the jokes. I like how you try to write about Steve's image of the current world with his technical devices. However, you might need to narrow it down into a specific idea, like for instance how would the creation of I-phone change our future, because what Steve had imagined would be limitless and it would be hard to write an essay on. Good Luck!!!
I agree with Chaki... but I like your unique viewpoint!!
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