In my first essay, I will write about gender.
I am interested in the connection between the idea of gender-free and the declining birth rate of Japan. Declining birth rate is one of the most serious problems in Japan. Nowadays, many women are working in society, which is a good thing. However, less women are housewives. If there is no one to take care of a child, couples won't have babies. I thought that this might be one reason for the declining birth rate of Japan. Also, it is interesting that there are some men called "Ikumen" who takes care of their child instead of their wife. Ikumen, which is also a product of gender-free, might increase the birth rate of Japan.
Thesis statement; The declining birth rate of Japan is related to women's social advancement.
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返信削除This thesis works as it is. I think it's appropriate to our theme of study and clearly and succinctly expressed.